Post by ashstar on Feb 14, 2014 22:22:52 GMT -6
This is my first fanfiction that I am going to actually try and finish. I understand that it is not going to be great, realize that I am rather young and have not yet taken Writing classes as I would like too.
“Somethings…. Different about this one.” A voice sounded. Several Pegasi were standing over a foal that had been abandoned at the Cloudsdayle hospital. Some ponies had taken her up to a room and took care of her.
“But… What shall we do with her? Surely she can’t stay here….” A black stallion with a striking yellow mane sighed.
“I agree Thunder Dash, but… Soren and I could take her,” Thunder glanced at the speaker, a light blue rainbowed mane Pegasus mare.
“The poor thing…..” The sound was quiet and soft and came from a pink maned yellow mare.
“Fluttershy, Can you help me take her back home? Stay the night and help me with the filly.” Rainbow Dash asked, and the shy yellow mare nodded, “See ya Thunder.”
The two mares left then, leaving Thunder Dash thinking.
Where did this little white filly come from? She must have parents, what if something had happened and she wasn’t supposed to be in Cloudsdayle, or who knows what? Something was strange about her, he just didn’t know what. Thunder Dash just shook his head, knowing he would have to find out where she came from.
Chapter `1
“Come on Lunar, you can do it!” Rainbow Dash and Soren, a blue Pegasus with a darker blue mane cheered. There was a Young Fliers competion, and the mysterious white filly was entered.
Lunar, fell name as Lunar Radiance , was still a filly. She had been raised as Rainbow’s and Soren’s baby, and that meant she was trained since she could walk.
The young filly was reared, ready to start the race. Also racing was Night Streak, Shy Cloud, and Flash Hurricane. A loud bell rang, and the four fillies and colts were off. Ahead of here was a black blue, closely followed by a pale blue one that she could make out as Night Streak and Flash Hurricane.
Lunar flapped her wings, knowing that Rainbow and Soren expected her to win, and she had to try. Her speed quickened, and behind her came a path of blue and white.
Come on…. She thought as she managed to past Night, who had fallen behind Flash. Lunar was coming in close, the winds canceled out any of the sounds the crowds were making. She shut her eyes, making one last effort. When Lunar’s eyes opened, she was flying past the line. Alone. She did it, Lunar actually won it. As she slowed and turned around, the crowd around her let out a scream.
Night Streak and Shy Cloud were on their hooves, running out of the area. Flash Hurricane was flying towards her,”Look up!” He shouted as he barreled over her, pushing her under the seats.
Above them was a strange thing. It was a Sonic Rainboom, but with many different shades of purple. “Thanks…” Lunar muttered to Flash Hurricane, “What is that?”
“Dunno.” At that moment, Rainbow Dash and Fleetfoot flew swiftly over to their children.
“Flash, come.” Fleetfoot demanded, and the pale blue colt with spiky white and gray mane left after her.
“Rainbow, what was that?” Lunar asked, coming out from under the seats.
“That was a Sonic Rainboom!” Her voice rose in excitement, ”Twilight Sparkle did it, to tell the Mane 6 to gather at the Library. Lunar, its time you met everypony.” The blue pegasi shot up into the clouds above and twirled around, “Come on Lunar!” She shouted and dived towards the ground.
Feeling exhausted, but not wanting to disappoint Rainbow Dash, she flew quickly after her. When she left the cloud arena, Lunar dove down, folding her wings to her sides as she gained speed. Below her, she could see Rainbow Dash pull up and fly a little up to watch Lunar. The ground neared swiftly, as did her speed. The filly spread out her small wings and pulled up, and to slow down she looped several times.
Lunar felt dizzy from exhaustion and wonder. Had she really done that? The pale white filly shook her head and set her hooves on the sturdy ground.
“That was awesome!” Rainbow Dash’s voice came from behind her. Hooves stomped the ground, not many though. She forced her eyes open, as she was surrounded by 6 adult ponies and several children. She recognized a few, Pinkie Pie, Apple Jack, and Fluttershy, but that was it. When Rainbow Dash went down to Ponyville, either Lunar was with Soren or the other 2 ponies just weren’t there.
“Is this the little on that you a-“ The pretty white unicorn said, her voice sounding ladylike and strange to her.
“Yes Rarity.” An… Alicorn for Celestia’s sake! She stood slightly taller then the others, a more faded purple with a darker mane and tail. She had glanced at this “Rarity”, and the look held some secret to it, but the filly just looked at the rest of them.
“Hey there lil’ sugercube!” Apple Jack, the orange earth pony said, dipping her head to Lunar.
“Rainbow, darling, what is her name?” Rarity asked, circling the white filly.
“Lunar Radiance, Princess Cadance came up with the name when she visited.” Silence. The alicorn princess had disappeared not long ago, leaving Shining Armor to tend to the Crystal Empire alone.
“Any who!” Pinkie Pie interrupted the silence,”Twily, whatcha need?” The pinke earth pony was bouncing in place for no apparent reason.
“Well, Princess Celestia needs all of us to get to Cantrlot soon. I was going to take Lunar with me, along with anypony who could go now,“ Twilight Sparkle, the purple alicorn spoke.
She drowned the rest out and slipped away to explore more of Ponyville. Houses lined the street, along with a boutique off to the side.
Lunar flapped her wings and flew low to the ground, looking around at the ponies curiously. She had never seen so many ponies of different kinds living together, peaceful. Obviously the purple Sonic Rainboom hadn’t spooked them as it had those in the clouds.
Ahead of her was the bakery, and the smell made her stomach growl.
“Move!” A colt shoved her out of the way. Lunar tumbled to the ground, skidding a few stretches away. By the time she looked up, she could barely make out a purple shape as it galloped away.
“Rude much…” Lunar muttered and trotted back to the group.
The 6 ponies were now heading to a library, that, interestingly enough, was the inside of a large hollow tree. Lunar followed in after Apple Jack, eye wide with amazement.
Princess Twilight glanced at her, a small smile across her face, “I have retrieved the Elements of Harmony. Lunar,” The taller alicorn turned to the young filly, “You will travel with me to Canterlot, while Apple Jack, and Pinkie Pie will leave tomorrow evening. Rainbow Dash, Rarity and Flutter Shy will leave in three days time, correct? Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo said that they would watch the pets. Any questions?”
“Yeah, what’s this all about anyways?” Rainbow Dash, who was hovering behind everypony else asked.
“Yes,Twilight. What is this all about?” Rarity also questioned, cocking her head towards her.
“I don’t know. All I know that it is somewhat urgent.” Twlight replied, sighing. She looked distressed, and Lunar had a feeling that the pretty alicorn knew more then she let on.
“Somethings…. Different about this one.” A voice sounded. Several Pegasi were standing over a foal that had been abandoned at the Cloudsdayle hospital. Some ponies had taken her up to a room and took care of her.
“But… What shall we do with her? Surely she can’t stay here….” A black stallion with a striking yellow mane sighed.
“I agree Thunder Dash, but… Soren and I could take her,” Thunder glanced at the speaker, a light blue rainbowed mane Pegasus mare.
“The poor thing…..” The sound was quiet and soft and came from a pink maned yellow mare.
“Fluttershy, Can you help me take her back home? Stay the night and help me with the filly.” Rainbow Dash asked, and the shy yellow mare nodded, “See ya Thunder.”
The two mares left then, leaving Thunder Dash thinking.
Where did this little white filly come from? She must have parents, what if something had happened and she wasn’t supposed to be in Cloudsdayle, or who knows what? Something was strange about her, he just didn’t know what. Thunder Dash just shook his head, knowing he would have to find out where she came from.
Chapter `1
“Come on Lunar, you can do it!” Rainbow Dash and Soren, a blue Pegasus with a darker blue mane cheered. There was a Young Fliers competion, and the mysterious white filly was entered.
Lunar, fell name as Lunar Radiance , was still a filly. She had been raised as Rainbow’s and Soren’s baby, and that meant she was trained since she could walk.
The young filly was reared, ready to start the race. Also racing was Night Streak, Shy Cloud, and Flash Hurricane. A loud bell rang, and the four fillies and colts were off. Ahead of here was a black blue, closely followed by a pale blue one that she could make out as Night Streak and Flash Hurricane.
Lunar flapped her wings, knowing that Rainbow and Soren expected her to win, and she had to try. Her speed quickened, and behind her came a path of blue and white.
Come on…. She thought as she managed to past Night, who had fallen behind Flash. Lunar was coming in close, the winds canceled out any of the sounds the crowds were making. She shut her eyes, making one last effort. When Lunar’s eyes opened, she was flying past the line. Alone. She did it, Lunar actually won it. As she slowed and turned around, the crowd around her let out a scream.
Night Streak and Shy Cloud were on their hooves, running out of the area. Flash Hurricane was flying towards her,”Look up!” He shouted as he barreled over her, pushing her under the seats.
Above them was a strange thing. It was a Sonic Rainboom, but with many different shades of purple. “Thanks…” Lunar muttered to Flash Hurricane, “What is that?”
“Dunno.” At that moment, Rainbow Dash and Fleetfoot flew swiftly over to their children.
“Flash, come.” Fleetfoot demanded, and the pale blue colt with spiky white and gray mane left after her.
“Rainbow, what was that?” Lunar asked, coming out from under the seats.
“That was a Sonic Rainboom!” Her voice rose in excitement, ”Twilight Sparkle did it, to tell the Mane 6 to gather at the Library. Lunar, its time you met everypony.” The blue pegasi shot up into the clouds above and twirled around, “Come on Lunar!” She shouted and dived towards the ground.
Feeling exhausted, but not wanting to disappoint Rainbow Dash, she flew quickly after her. When she left the cloud arena, Lunar dove down, folding her wings to her sides as she gained speed. Below her, she could see Rainbow Dash pull up and fly a little up to watch Lunar. The ground neared swiftly, as did her speed. The filly spread out her small wings and pulled up, and to slow down she looped several times.
Lunar felt dizzy from exhaustion and wonder. Had she really done that? The pale white filly shook her head and set her hooves on the sturdy ground.
“That was awesome!” Rainbow Dash’s voice came from behind her. Hooves stomped the ground, not many though. She forced her eyes open, as she was surrounded by 6 adult ponies and several children. She recognized a few, Pinkie Pie, Apple Jack, and Fluttershy, but that was it. When Rainbow Dash went down to Ponyville, either Lunar was with Soren or the other 2 ponies just weren’t there.
“Is this the little on that you a-“ The pretty white unicorn said, her voice sounding ladylike and strange to her.
“Yes Rarity.” An… Alicorn for Celestia’s sake! She stood slightly taller then the others, a more faded purple with a darker mane and tail. She had glanced at this “Rarity”, and the look held some secret to it, but the filly just looked at the rest of them.
“Hey there lil’ sugercube!” Apple Jack, the orange earth pony said, dipping her head to Lunar.
“Rainbow, darling, what is her name?” Rarity asked, circling the white filly.
“Lunar Radiance, Princess Cadance came up with the name when she visited.” Silence. The alicorn princess had disappeared not long ago, leaving Shining Armor to tend to the Crystal Empire alone.
“Any who!” Pinkie Pie interrupted the silence,”Twily, whatcha need?” The pinke earth pony was bouncing in place for no apparent reason.
“Well, Princess Celestia needs all of us to get to Cantrlot soon. I was going to take Lunar with me, along with anypony who could go now,“ Twilight Sparkle, the purple alicorn spoke.
She drowned the rest out and slipped away to explore more of Ponyville. Houses lined the street, along with a boutique off to the side.
Lunar flapped her wings and flew low to the ground, looking around at the ponies curiously. She had never seen so many ponies of different kinds living together, peaceful. Obviously the purple Sonic Rainboom hadn’t spooked them as it had those in the clouds.
Ahead of her was the bakery, and the smell made her stomach growl.
“Move!” A colt shoved her out of the way. Lunar tumbled to the ground, skidding a few stretches away. By the time she looked up, she could barely make out a purple shape as it galloped away.
“Rude much…” Lunar muttered and trotted back to the group.
The 6 ponies were now heading to a library, that, interestingly enough, was the inside of a large hollow tree. Lunar followed in after Apple Jack, eye wide with amazement.
Princess Twilight glanced at her, a small smile across her face, “I have retrieved the Elements of Harmony. Lunar,” The taller alicorn turned to the young filly, “You will travel with me to Canterlot, while Apple Jack, and Pinkie Pie will leave tomorrow evening. Rainbow Dash, Rarity and Flutter Shy will leave in three days time, correct? Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo said that they would watch the pets. Any questions?”
“Yeah, what’s this all about anyways?” Rainbow Dash, who was hovering behind everypony else asked.
“Yes,Twilight. What is this all about?” Rarity also questioned, cocking her head towards her.
“I don’t know. All I know that it is somewhat urgent.” Twlight replied, sighing. She looked distressed, and Lunar had a feeling that the pretty alicorn knew more then she let on.